rework, expand, add, close
|
your information is good, but
you could think about reorganizing it and making it clear
and concise, expand or add
|
redo
|
you should start again - either
the information is incomplete or has been stated previously
or does not belong
|
sentence, choppy
|
the content structure is either
not a sentence or needs to be reworked or is choppy, without
flow
|
fun,
games,
activities
|
fun
-
talk about an engaged classroom, making learning meaningful,
motivated students; be extremely careful
about using terms like games or activities that diminish the
value of skill development
|
circled
word or words
|
this
will
focus your attention on a misspelled word or use of a
term/word or a section that needs attention (see above
comment guide)
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gen ed
|
typically in opening paragraph
- this should give your general educational perspective - a
broad statement, not one focused on hpe
|
purpose
|
this
will
be similar to your mission statement - it should be clear
and you should be able to remove it from the paper and place
it on your door or share it with someone in the hall
|
value
|
part
of
second paragraph that offers support and rationale for
including HPE (e.g., obesity)
|
neg
|
state
your philosophy in a positive manner; don't make excuses or
put down HPE
|
content
|
you are missing content - this
could refer to incomplete information for that paragraph,
lack of defined hpe offerings
|
NJCCCS
|
New Jersey Core Curriculum
Content Standards - you can use the acronym - remember, your
content/curriculum will help address the NJCCCS NOT your
curriculum/content is created from......
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styles, strategies
|
refers to learning styles,
teaching styles, teaching strategies, differentiated
learning
|
assessment
|
you
should
reference assessment - types (self, peer,
teacher........informal and formal), domains (affective,
cognitive, psychomotor), etc. - you should not be limiting
your assessment to "if they participate" only - my guess is
that you did not have a math class where the instructor gave
you a grade simply because you "showed up."
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best practices
|
these include items like
developmentally appropriate, equipment, max op to
participate, etc - note the brochure link
|
not
nec
|
not
necessary;
your statement doesn't add anything to the philosophy - so
eliminate or redo
|
tighten
|
consider combining sentences; reduce the
number of words; write, don't talk
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